Okay, so I have decided to take the Dark Angel Poems & turn them into a book.... Developing the other characters in the book:Victor of Evil & Zombie Slayer....    Anyway, i just finished a poem about the dark angel finally forgiving the victor of evil.... But i 'm not sure if the tittle works, or if the ending works.. So PLEASE tell me what you think......

FORGIVENESS

10-24-07

Creeping in your window

I watch you sleep

I didn't come to disturb you

Instead I came seeking peace.

I forgive you

For the broken promises you made

The manipulations

And the games you played.

I forgive you

For the hurt and betraying me

Your cowardly actions

And for the lies you made me believe.

The dark angel and victor of evil

Were never meant to be

Being friends didn't work either

So what made us believe.

We tried

And failed again

Now we're to the point

Were hate is all there is in the end.

I've finally forgiven you

And I'm moving on

Told you I was better than you

The pain and anger are now gone

But if our paths ever cross

Just let it be known

That I will do what I have to

Even if it means to kill you.

Cause you are evil

And I am the essence of good

Forgiveness doesn't mean a thing

In this world

When only one of us can survive.